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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by MilkyDefer (talk | contribs) at 13:45, 2 August 2023. The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Reviewer: The Night Watch (talk · contribs) 19:41, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


I'll take this one on. If you don't hear back from my by Saturday, please ping me. The Night Watch (talk) 19:41, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Additional comments from MilkyDefer

Great, I am always waiting for someone else to pick this up, so that I will not be the main reviewer.

  • To start with, I noticed a sourcing problem for some time. The article claims that the creators referenced Wordsworth's Book of Words during creating the game. If my memory served right, that's only the interviewer's speculation, not fact.
  • Also I would like to mention that the current prose of the review section is perhaps pretty bad. It's just piling up quotations.

I, the GA contributor for this article in zhwiki, is always at your service. MilkyDefer 13:44, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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