Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of accolades received by Gone Girl (film)/archive1

• his wife Amy played by Rosamund Pike Add a comma after "Amy".
• Neil Patrick Harris, and Tyler Perry Remove the comma.
• The score was composed by Trent Reznor, and Atticus Ross. Remove the comma.
• Gone Girl premiered at the New York Film Festival on September 26, 2014,[2] before 20th Century Fox later gave the film a wide release at over 3,000 theaters in the United States, and Canada on October 3. Remove "later" and the comma after "United States".
• Pike won the Empire Award for Best Actress, and Breakthrough Performance Award from the Palm Springs International Film Festival, and was also nominated at the Screen Actors Guild, and British Academy Film Awards (BAFTAs). Could you split this up into two sentences or phrase it better? You say "and" three times in just one sentence.
• Flynn was also nominated at the BAFTAs as well as the Writers Guild of America Awards. Add a comma before "as well as".
• The National Board of Review included Gone Girl in its list of top ten films of the year. Add "their" before "top ten films of the year".
• African-American Film Critics Association should come before American Cinema Editors in the infobox. Same in the table.

Otherwise, this is a great list! Littlecarmen (talk) 21:09, 28 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Littlecarmen: Thanks for the review! I think I've sorted the above points. Cowlibob (talk) 22:16, 28 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "Gone Girl is a 2014 psychological thriller directed by" – I think you missed the word "film".
• "As of July 2015, Gone Girl is Fincher's highest grossing film" – hyphenate "highest grossing".
• Empty the references from the third paragraph as they are not supposed to be repeated in the lead when they are already covered in the main body of the article – see WP:LEAD.
• It should be either Deadline.com or Deadline.
• Again, it should be either "The Hollywood Reporter. Prometheus Global Media" or "The Hollywood Reporter (Prometheus Global Media)".
• Why is National Board of Review seen twice in ref 13, and also link it.
• The date format for ref 39 isn't as others are.
• Ref 51 is incomplete. I mean it's by The Hollywood Reporter, but I can't see such.

I think that's all from me. -- Frankie _talk 13:32, 29 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@FrB.TG: Thanks for the review. I think I've sorted the issues highlighted, please let me know if I haven't. Cowlibob (talk) 20:47, 30 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Just like 87th Academy Awards, maintain consistency with Golden Globes --> 72nd Golden Globe Awards, Screen Actors Guild Awards --> 21st Screen Actors Guild Awards and British Academy Film Awards --> 68th British Academy Film Awards
• You can use "The film" instead of Gone Girl alternatively if you want. - Vivvt (Talk) 09:12, 11 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Vivvt: Thanks for the review. Ssven2 has gotten ahead of me and has resolved these queries. Let me know if it was satisfactory and any other further comments you'd like to make. Cowlibob (talk) 18:07, 11 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Above comments are resolved. I have trimmed some of the references. Feel free to revert if you do not like it that way. Also, could you please add Portal:Film in the United States under "See also" section?