Talk:Australian raven/GA1
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Reviewer: IJReid (talk · contribs) 02:21, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
Hey Cas liber, I'll take up this review. I have already read the lead and taxonomy, with only one comment: Have any cladograms on the genetic studies been published, and if so, could the most recent be added?
A few comments on the description:
The juvenile image could be moved to the juvenile paragraph
Some more info could be added to the juvenile paragraph, maybe more detail on the head?
A little more overall description could be added.
Vocalization is behaviour, not description.
More behavioural comments:
How long did the male live, as the article only says over 12 years after banding.
- It's tricky - all I can go on is what the source says, which gives as accurate as possible a picture - so it was an adult male (hence 3 years old at least), plus 12 years. Unfortunately unlike trees, birds lack tree-rings so we can guess the bird was at least 15 and a half years old, but the source doesn't make that inference...so neither will I (not sure why) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:20, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
What the heck are "yabbies"
- a freshwater crayfish in oz - my dad used to catch them all the time - linked to Common yabby now Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 07:46, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
Good luck, IJReid (talk) 02:21, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
Only a few more things to add, and then this article will be placed on hold:
There are many more images, a few of which could be used in the article.
"Relationships with humans" as well as "Predators" could form subsections of a section titled "Conservation".
This article itself mentions nothing about the IUCN ranking, which would be placed within Conservation.
Once all these queries are completed, the article should pass GA. The article is a good read :). IJReid (talk) 03:47, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
The article is now a GA. Good job! :)' IJReid (talk) 21:56, 19 October 2014 (UTC)