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15 April 2022
- 11:4011:40, 15 April 2022 diff hist +10 1964 Monson Motor Lodge protests Minor edits to the last sentence of the first paragraph to make it less clumsy, and minor edits to the first sentence of the second paragraph: clumsy use of 'meanwhile'. I did not remove any words with meaning, but did remove and add some logical connectors and reorder the two sentences. Being an anonymous contributor and not knowledgeable in these matters I don't presume to add meaning to the article, but suggest a sentence after 'collapsed' to explain the meaning of the filibuster collapse.