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A user with 123 changes. Account created on 30 October 2006.
26 December 2012
- 06:2506:25, 26 December 2012 diff hist +461 User talk:DoctorW →Photo problems: Thank you for the clarification.
24 December 2012
- 09:1609:16, 24 December 2012 diff hist +102 Psychology →Other websites: Added link to "Psychology" at the Open Directory Project (on en.wikipedia page).
- 09:0609:06, 24 December 2012 diff hist +447 Independence Hall Unable to add IndependenceHallAssemblyRoom.jpg photo from en.wikipedia. PLEASE ADD IF YOU KNOW HOW. See embedded comments.
- 08:4408:44, 24 December 2012 diff hist +12 m Independence Hall Added "president's".
- 08:4308:43, 24 December 2012 diff hist +34 Independence Hall Simplified and clarified caption for first floor.
- 08:4008:40, 24 December 2012 diff hist +1,047 Independence Hall Added diagram and photos from en.wikipedia.
- 08:1508:15, 24 December 2012 diff hist +8 m Independence Hall Wikilinked "Liberty Bell" and "Abraham Lincoln".
- 08:1308:13, 24 December 2012 diff hist +175 Independence Hall Added a few facts.
- 08:0208:02, 24 December 2012 diff hist −1 m Fallingwater De-linked "Franklin Toker" and "Western Pennsylvania Conservancy"; added punctuation.
- 08:0008:00, 24 December 2012 diff hist +1,108 Fallingwater Copied "Further reading" and "Other websites" from en.wikipedia.
- 07:5607:56, 24 December 2012 diff hist +274 Fallingwater Added additional details about the house.
- 07:4707:47, 24 December 2012 diff hist +390 Fallingwater Added another paragraph about the features of the house.
- 07:3407:34, 24 December 2012 diff hist −28 Fallingwater Simplified wording of caption.
- 07:3307:33, 24 December 2012 diff hist +128 Fallingwater Added photo from en.wikipedia page.
- 07:2807:28, 24 December 2012 diff hist +26 Frank Lloyd Wright →Fallingwater: Added "See also".
- 07:2507:25, 24 December 2012 diff hist +4 Frank Lloyd Wright →Fallingwater: Wikilinked to new "Fallingwater" page.
- 07:1707:17, 24 December 2012 diff hist +1,007 Fallingwater Copied infobox from en.wikipedia.
- 07:1107:11, 24 December 2012 diff hist +2 m Frank Lloyd Wright Minor: paragraph break.
- 07:1007:10, 24 December 2012 diff hist +2 m Fallingwater Minor: paragraph break.
- 07:0907:09, 24 December 2012 diff hist +1,809 N Fallingwater Created Fallingwater page.
- 07:0407:04, 24 December 2012 diff hist +13 Frank Lloyd Wright →Fallingwater: Minor clarification.
- 07:0307:03, 24 December 2012 diff hist +125 Frank Lloyd Wright →Fallingwater: Added fact from en.wikipedia Fallingwater page.
- 07:0107:01, 24 December 2012 diff hist +108 Frank Lloyd Wright Added photo of Fallingwater.
- 06:5306:53, 24 December 2012 diff hist +122 Frank Lloyd Wright Made improvements and format corrections to citation.
- 06:4406:44, 24 December 2012 diff hist +100 Frank Lloyd Wright →Fallingwater: Replaced reference with a better one (more detailed, quoted on web site).
- 06:2606:26, 24 December 2012 diff hist +1,353 Frank Lloyd Wright →Architecture: Added section on Fallingwater.
- 05:3405:34, 24 December 2012 diff hist +2 m Psychology →Psychologists: Clarification: APA doesn't say Ph.D. and a current state license are needed (current state license applies to Psy.D.).
- 05:2705:27, 24 December 2012 diff hist −27 Psychology →Branches: Moved "Child psychology" to appropriate category.
- 05:1605:16, 24 December 2012 diff hist +126 Saturn V Added link to "Diagram of the Saturn V using only the 1000 words people use the most often".
- 05:1005:10, 24 December 2012 diff hist −9 m Force Changed wikilinking to the word "pressure" only.
23 December 2012
- 06:2306:23, 23 December 2012 diff hist −8 Fixed-wing aircraft Removed unnecessary words.
- 06:1606:16, 23 December 2012 diff hist 0 Balloon (aircraft) →Kinds of balloon aircraft: Minor change for readability; grammar correction.
- 06:1406:14, 23 December 2012 diff hist +14 Balloon (aircraft) →Kinds of balloon aircraft: Added "spread out".
- 06:1106:11, 23 December 2012 diff hist +21 Balloon (aircraft) Added " (except up and down)".
- 06:0806:08, 23 December 2012 diff hist +39 Balloon See also Balloon (aircraft).
- 06:0506:05, 23 December 2012 diff hist −6 m Debate Removed unnecessary word.
- 06:0406:04, 23 December 2012 diff hist +44 Debate Debate is not always formal. Broke into two sentences for simplicity and clarity.
- 05:5905:59, 23 December 2012 diff hist +4 m Wright brothers →Before building airplanes: Wikilinked "debate".
- 05:5705:57, 23 December 2012 diff hist −12 Dayton, Ohio Simplified wording.
- 05:5605:56, 23 December 2012 diff hist −4 Dayton, Ohio Corrected factual error.
- 05:5405:54, 23 December 2012 diff hist +4 Wright brothers Switched location of "Kitty Hawk, North Carolina" and requested page creation by redlinking.
- 05:5005:50, 23 December 2012 diff hist +12 Wright brothers Simplified, clarified, added important information ("designed, built, and flew"); wikilinked key pages.
- 05:4805:48, 23 December 2012 diff hist 0 m Aircraft Minor clarification.
- 05:4505:45, 23 December 2012 diff hist −9 m Wright brothers Simplified sentence.
- 05:4105:41, 23 December 2012 diff hist 0 m Wright brothers Capitalization
- 05:4005:40, 23 December 2012 diff hist +18 Wright brothers New section: "First Flight"; renamed previous section.
- 05:3605:36, 23 December 2012 diff hist +2 Wright brothers →After the flight: Paragraph break.
- 05:3505:35, 23 December 2012 diff hist +4 m Wright brothers →Interest in Flight: Paragraph breaks.
- 05:3405:34, 23 December 2012 diff hist +118 Wright brothers →Before Building Airplanes: Debate a topic, then switch sides and argue for the opposite. Paragraph break.
- 05:3105:31, 23 December 2012 diff hist +142 Wright brothers →Before Building Airplanes: Lots of books in the house; encouraged to ask questions and explore interests.
- 05:2405:24, 23 December 2012 diff hist +15 Wright brothers →Interest in Flight: Added "Kitty Hawk" and simplified sentence structure.
- 05:2205:22, 23 December 2012 diff hist +4 m Wright brothers →Interest in Flight: Minor wording change.
- 05:2005:20, 23 December 2012 diff hist +283 Wright brothers →Interest in Flight: Made additions and changes to second half of section (1900-1903).
- 05:0805:08, 23 December 2012 diff hist +2 m Wright brothers →Interest in Flight: Clarification that "Wing-warping" is not the name of a publication.
- 05:0605:06, 23 December 2012 diff hist 0 m Wright brothers Moved citation for Crouch to first incidence of footnote reference.
- 05:0405:04, 23 December 2012 diff hist +88 Wright brothers →Interest in Flight: Simplified wording and sentence structure; added reference for wing-warping.
- 04:5204:52, 23 December 2012 diff hist 0 m Wright brothers →Before Building Airplanes: Minor format correction.
- 04:5104:51, 23 December 2012 diff hist +2 m Wright brothers →Before Building Airplanes: Simplified and clarified sentence. Made minor format correction.
- 04:5004:50, 23 December 2012 diff hist −2 m Wright brothers →Before Building Airplanes: Simplified sentence structure, adding pedagogical value for speakers of languages without common plurals.
- 04:4704:47, 23 December 2012 diff hist +4 m Wright brothers →After the flight: Minor format change to reference.
- 04:4504:45, 23 December 2012 diff hist −6 m Wright brothers →After the flight: Minor simplifications to wording and sentence structure.
- 04:4204:42, 23 December 2012 diff hist 0 m Wright brothers →After the flight: Minor wording change.
- 04:4004:40, 23 December 2012 diff hist +113 Wright brothers →After the flight: Filled out citation; clarified dates of flights. Made minor format adjustments.
- 04:2504:25, 23 December 2012 diff hist 0 m Wright brothers →After the flight: Corrected typo in patents reference.
- 04:2404:24, 23 December 2012 diff hist +64 Wright brothers Added link for reference in the introduction.
- 04:0304:03, 23 December 2012 diff hist −182 Jupiter (mythology) Deleted superfluous, self-serving reference (new world encyclopedia).
28 December 2009
- 19:5719:57, 28 December 2009 diff hist +1 m Psychology Added serial comma.
- 19:5619:56, 28 December 2009 diff hist +18 Psychology Rephrased introduction to more closely follow consensus in English Wikipedia article.
- 19:5119:51, 28 December 2009 diff hist −1 Positivism Rephrased ungrammatical sentence.
- 19:1119:11, 28 December 2009 diff hist +6 Positivism Made modification that more closely follows the consensus on English Wikipedia.
- 19:0919:09, 28 December 2009 diff hist −12 Psychology →Symbolic and subjective approaches: Removed template after corrections.
- 19:0819:08, 28 December 2009 diff hist −2,405 Psychology →Symbolic and subjective approaches: Corrected massive undue weight. The English Wikipedia article on psychology may serve as a model, though it also gives undue weight to old approaches.
- 18:5518:55, 28 December 2009 diff hist −12 Psychology →Scientific approaches: Experiments are not the only scientific method in psychology.
- 18:5018:50, 28 December 2009 diff hist −151 Psychology →Scientific approaches: Removed false statement. One might assert behaviorism (minority view for decades) tends toward positivism.
- 18:3218:32, 28 December 2009 diff hist +496 Talk:Classical economics Capitalization appears to follow Wikipedia conventions. current
27 December 2009
- 23:5723:57, 27 December 2009 diff hist +2,274 The Wealth of Nations Expanded article by copying from Classical economics. Please check (not my field).
- 22:4122:41, 27 December 2009 diff hist +2,864 N Classical economics Started article. Please check (not my field) and add material.
- 20:0720:07, 27 December 2009 diff hist +5 m Economics →Branches of economics: Someone intended a paragraph break here but didn't implement it correctly, also added another; rephrasing.
- 20:0320:03, 27 December 2009 diff hist +20 Economics →General economic rules: Corrected ungrammatical English, modified awkward phrase, and rephrased a few items with simple English guidelines in mind.
- 19:5519:55, 27 December 2009 diff hist +96 Economics →General economic rules: Rewrote point about government taking action to address "externalities".
- 19:4319:43, 27 December 2009 diff hist −18 Economics →General economic rules: Changed convoluted phrasing to simpler structure.
- 18:2818:28, 27 December 2009 diff hist −14 m Economics →General economic rules: Removed unnecessary words.
26 December 2009
- 23:4723:47, 26 December 2009 diff hist +28 Economics →The subjects and objects in economics: Copyedit.
- 23:4423:44, 26 December 2009 diff hist −29 Economics →The subjects and objects in economics: The phrase "transfer payments" does not appear in Wikipedia's more comprehensive Economics article; should we include it here?
- 23:4023:40, 26 December 2009 diff hist −76 Economics →The subjects and objects in economics: Poor wording was misleading (even to me), attempted to fix. Please check (economics not my field).
- 22:2422:24, 26 December 2009 diff hist −16 Economics →The subjects and objects in economics: Improved phrasing of sentence.
- 22:2122:21, 26 December 2009 diff hist −12 m Economics →The subjects and objects in economics: Removed awkward and unnecessary phrase: "as subjects".
- 22:1722:17, 26 December 2009 diff hist +1 m Economics →The subjects and objects in economics: Added missing space.
- 22:1222:12, 26 December 2009 diff hist +20 Economics →Three ideas: Added simple phrasing to clarify "Scarcity": "not having enough"
2 February 2009
- 01:2301:23, 2 February 2009 diff hist +292 Wright brothers Reference provided for plain statement with no weaseling; reference section created.
23 September 2008
- 07:4007:40, 23 September 2008 diff hist +4 m Christianity Added wikilink.
- 07:3807:38, 23 September 2008 diff hist +10 m Christianity Interjected more common word.
- 07:3607:36, 23 September 2008 diff hist +2 m Christianity Added quotation marks.
- 07:3507:35, 23 September 2008 diff hist +18 Christianity Changed awkward wording.
- 07:1207:12, 23 September 2008 diff hist −160 Tao Te Ching Cleaned up external links.
- 07:0007:00, 23 September 2008 diff hist +57 Japanese language Simplified.
- 06:4806:48, 23 September 2008 diff hist −2 m Kyoto Reverted vandalism from a previous edit.
- 06:4306:43, 23 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Kyoto Serial comma adds clarity.
- 06:4006:40, 23 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Kyoto Added comma.
- 06:3906:39, 23 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Kyoto Serial comma adds clarity.