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2.0 out of 5 starsWell written book, but highly fictionalized
ByPaul Lackeyon September 8, 2013
This book is well written, is an engaging story and discusses a very important topic--to this day, the atrocities happening against the Papuans by the Indonesian military represent one of the worst, albeit one of the least known, humanitarian outrages occurring in the world. Unfortunately, this book, although being passed off as a factual account of Ms. Salak's journey, plays very loosely with facts and is highly fictionalized.
I know this because I am one of the "characters" in this book. My father is "Doug Larsen", the villainous missionary portrayed in the chapter "Hungarian Delights". The description in this portion of the book is almost entirely fictitious. No, we didn't live in an air conditioned white mansion. Although our house was made of "Western" materials (lumber and corrugated iron) it was powered solely by 9 30 watt solar panels and could never have been air conditioned--even if it had had glass windows, which it didn't. The electricity was used primarily to run a freezer for vaccinations, and we had an emergency generator which we almost never used due to the difficulty and expense of getting fuel to such a remote spot. And of course the house wasn't white. Anyone who has been to the lowlands of PNG would know the futility of trying to paint a house white. Our "running water" was rain collection that was entirely hand pumped (yes, we pumped it ourselves). And we never had delicacies such as strawberries the entire time we were there--almost all the food we ate was local (actually quite good, but for the most part, the same thing the locals ate). Of course the idea that a SDA would spend Saturday morning at home eating brunch will make anyone laugh who is familiar with the religion. It is true that we lived in relative comfort compared to the local people--they are the poorest people on Earth, so it's hard not to. The decision to build western style houses was made by others before our time, and even though Ms. Salak's description of our house as an isolated mansion is incorrect, in retrospect building such a house was at some level a mistake and had to be somewhat alienating.
These nitpicking details are insignificant compared to the wholesale character assassination committed against my parents. The description of their personalities is as far as possible from the truth. Far from being a sociopathic scheming crusader, my father was a phlegmatic non judgmental individual by anyone's account. He was well loved by the people (this was not an act--New Guineans wear their heart on their sleeves) and unlike described in the book there was no bribery involved to win affections. Likewise, my mother (at 5'2" and 125 pounds not "robust") was in no way "severe" and did not comport herself with a "royal air" or try to lord over anyone.
In fact, my parents were not "church planting" or "evangelical" missionaries at all. They were medical missionaries. The government of Papua New Guinea had built a clinic at May River (which was actually a government station) but due to the remoteness of the area were unable to staff it. They asked the SDA church, which like all churches has a strong presence in the country, if they could staff it, and my parents who were nurses who had always wanted to be missionaries volunteered to go. The government put my father in charge of a health district consisting of 50 villages and ranging north to south from Hotmin to the Sepik river and east to west from Lake Warangai to the Sandaun Province border. Three to four days of every week my father spent visiting these villages, conducting mobile clinics and conducting vaccination/maternal health/family planning programs. On these trips, he took nothing with him but medicine and vaccination, and he ate and slept in whatever accommodations were given at the villages. There was no pressure for any of these villagers to become SDA or Christian or to do anything else in exchange for the medication. While on these trips, my mother ran the May River clinic along with some nurses from an SDA hospital in the highlands and some locals who had been trained to provide health services.
The most outrageous claim in the book is the bizarre story of my father crusading against "stone tools". At no point did we make any attempt to change the culture of the people there--and in fact during the time we were there there was very little change in the culture of the people except for that wrought by an influx of money due to mining exploration at the nearby Frieda River. But this claim is ludicrous even on its face. The fact is that May River was a government station that was set up in the mid 1960s, and was staffed by "Kiaps" (kind of like a colonial sheriff)--first Australian and later New Guinean--for decades before our arrival in 1991. Stone tools had fallen out of use long before our arrival as steel had followed the government, although they were still used somewhat in some of the most remote villages in the health district. Needless to say, my father didn't try to eradicate those. Most of the "infrastructure" at May River Station, such as the clinic and the western style housing had been built by the government. The most ironic part of this fable is that Ms. Salak describes my father's character's smugness at destroying the stone tools by comparing it to as if he had eliminated a disease--which is what he ACTUALLY did. Through the vaccination program, Polio and Measles were eradicated from that region.
Why Ms. Salak chose to fictionalize this account, I don't know. Perhaps she did meet some rotten missionary characters (there are plenty of them around) and created a composite character. Or maybe it just better fit the story she wanted to tell by having the first westerners that she meets upon emerging from the jungle be these crazy sociopaths. But regardless, to pass this off as a factual account is not particularly ethical.
From other details that I am intimately knowledgeable of (I lived in the village of Arai for some time, and I personally know "Mozart") it is clear that a factual account was not Ms. Salak's goal. So although this is an enjoyable read and covers a very important topic, as a travel documentary take it with a substantial grain of salt.